Comment 1 – Lauren
The first beta i commented on was Laurens, who is using their DA to speak about the positive effects that games can have on its players. This is being done by investigating experiences with nintendogs, a game a lot of people played in their childhood. I commented that i enjoyed her DA and the fact she was using audience feedback to keep a clear direction to her work. I felt like she was already drawing on subject materials well, so i offered her some research on how video games may be improving literacy in children as another example of the positive effects that games can have. I feel like this comment has improved over my past ones as i am a lot more direct and to the point in this comment.
Comment 2 – Jett
Jett’s DA looks at game re-makes and the good…
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