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Hey Ethan!

To start off, I really like the way you have introduced the game you are studying and provided a bit of background context for those who may not have a lot of background knowledge on the game. I did notice a couple of spelling and grammatical errors such as the sentence that read “to their style of game from game into real life as well as their ratings, I will look at how the game is as where they have excelled from my league, to career mode and my player, “. I did find this a tad hard to read but the information within was really great as it offered me some context into what we can expect from the pitch! Moving onto your video, I really liked the information you gave, especially when providing your own personal opinion. I like that you’ll be reviewing…

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