Critical Self-Reflection of Comments 2

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Comment 1: https://utteromnishambles.wordpress.com/2019/09/20/there-was-a-game-here-an-update/comment-page-1/#comment-97

For this comment, I gave some positive feedback for the overall project and only suggested doing some further research in aspects of the digital artefact. I also provided a source of my own research towards their digital artefact.

Comment 2: https://antslifedotblog.wordpress.com/2019/09/14/gaming-in-education-active-audiences/comment-page-1/?unapproved=118&moderation-hash=0a98d94c100f4dcdeff01c099c3cfae0#comment-118

For this comment, I gave some constructive criticism with the blog and beta video. I also suggested ways in which they can engage with an audience such as posting a poll on Twitter.

Comment 3: https://tgoldsmithblog.wordpress.com/2019/09/20/what-now-amped-up-artificial-intelligence-beta/

For this comment, I gave lots of positive feedback as I felt there wasn’t much criticism towards their project. I also just suggested some ways of continuing their digital artefact in terms of feedback etc.

Self-Reflection of Comments 

When undertaking feedback for my peers I wanted to ensure I was insightful towards their digital artefact. I also wanted to be critical in a constructed way by giving them feedback to…

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