Critical Comment on Comments (Pitch Review)

To provide valuable feedback, I carefully watch the video and post in the way they arranged in the blog three times. All three blogs’ structure is different, so I ensure that I went through it in the order they presented. Also, I’m not very familiar with the video game as a whole, so I want to make sure that I understand each sentence. I appreciate that they all have a well-arranged structure, and they all explained the topic very clear.


Serena’s DA plans to explore the reason why media always blame mass gun shooting tragedy on games that contain violence. In her pitch video, she particularly pointed out that she will use arguments from both sides to illustrate and try to exclude her biased, subjective opinion.

I think she has done an excellent job; the video and the contextual post cover different topics, and it is not repetitive at…

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