The first post:
The second post
The third post
What did I do:
I read those post carefully on account of the attractive and innovative topic. In the first and second post, I suggest them to narrow down the range of their research. In the third post, I suggest the blogger to change the font for the aim of articstic and structured.
What did I learn and how to improve:
I found my DA pitch has same imperfections. First, I should provide the format and present the content of the contextual essay. Secondly, my DA topic should be more specific.
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